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You and I
Lying on the grass…
Looking up
And counting the stars…
Giving names
To one and each…
Lifting our fingers
Pretending, them, we can reach…
Sharing silly stories
Laughing like kids…
Being with each other
Filled with such bliss…
Looking together
In the same direction…
Sharing a dream
So near to perfection…
My arms around you
your safety, your shield…
Your soothing touch
My heart’s content and fulfilled…
We feign ignorance
To the moon’s descent slow…
Which will give way to tomorrow
When you will have to go…
Time we can’t enslave
But this moment we can save…
Like children
The moment we seize…
The feeling, the togetherness
In our memories we try to freeze…
The memories will be
Penned in my diary’s page…
So that they don’t vanish
I will keep them in cage…
When you far away,
When you are not near…
That page will be
Kissed by my falling tears…
16 comments:
Very evocative...and simply beautiful!
Beautiful...liked the muse and you are always at home with these emotional love writes...good good!
To the moon’s descent slow…
Ah, you know my favourite line.
The entire verse is a beauty,
coz memories are always beautiful
to be cherished forever. :)
moved and touched me to d core...
so tender,so glistening with tears...
loved it,frend. kp writing more n more...
Toooo goood...!!
Loved the dexterity involved in the flow of words..
amazing one..!
Hi TWG,
Thanks for visiting and following my blog. That was a lovely poem, so poignant and subtle... Isn't that how life is?!!
Shall be back soon.
Cheers!
Anuja
P.S: I finished my MA in Psych. Currently working in Pune.
Beautiful.
As I read your poem, I could see the stars, too. You brought me into your world.
This was so beautiful.I like to write poetry sometimes. I rated it a five too.
awesome work!
Beautiful and trusting, a lovely
sonnet.
beautiful just as all of your previous poems...thanks for adding my blog to your blog roll :))..
i always like the rhythm you use...
great write up :)
soothing and elating
keep them flowing
regards
sayani
Very Moving :-) Will return to read more!
Wonderfully written! Struck a chord! Simple, elegant, emotional.
Love your work!
Very Nostalgic.
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