Yes, this poem was one of my first few posts in this blog. I'm deleting that post and re-posting with a few changes here and there :)
A long forgotten letter,
With words faded…
Cos so many times they
Were, by my eyes, caressed…
A single red rose
With petals dried…
Nestled in my diary
Still smelling of July…
A sea shell locket
so pretty and shiny…
From the walk on the beach…
Still can hear the sound of the sea…
A shining rock
From the calm stream…
Ages have passed
But I still feel its gleam…
An old picture
Us, smiling, together…
Was it yesterday or a lifetime back?
Still such happy memories it stirs…
A brown twig
From our walk in the woods…
Can still smell the night…
Oh! How I wish the time stood…
But time didn’t stand…
It rushed past…
And I am left with my memories…
Holding them in my hands… hoping they will last…
19 comments:
Re-posting as you like still smell July night.
Beautiful!!!!
excellent poem
felt like again watching Titanic movie.
wow..still smelling of july...Nice one.
I loved the about me section a lot :)
as someone said....get ur stuff published
Shakespearean? Not.
Come visit me regardless!
I want your haiku...
Ok, that may not be your type of poetry, but hopefully it will entice you to try your hand at it!
If you have time, stop by "my place" and take part in my first ever "Silly Haiku Wednesday"!
Can't wait to see what you come up with!
Wonderful. Well written.
Cheers!
The "..." takes a lil bit away from the nostalgia. Think about that. Other than well structured. :)
truly breath-taking..one of those poems u'd like 2 read once in a while to remind you of fond memeories!
Beautiful :)
Your memories look wonderful. It was nice going through your blog. Keep it up the good work. Cheers :)
Very pretty thoughts!
lovely as usual....
very nostalgic...why dont you ever try something entirely lighthearted, just for the sake of it?given your talents, ul do a really good job of it.
beautiful...the last time felt the same when i stayed up all night to see the dawn break..you captured it...
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