Thursday, December 11, 2008

The Emptiness in a Lover...(Haiku No. 4)




Barren I feel dear,
Dry as a bone here I stay,
My soul aches for ye!

3 comments:

Sayani said...

Well thats a genius post..so many emotions with only three lines ....amazing

take care...keep writing

regards
sayani

Amitava said...

oh my! paint my pain, and this is what you'll see... good one wandering gypsy!!
Hey really really fine work these haikus... and your work in the other two, the first and last have such prayerful tones in the joy of nature!
More, please..!!

Amitabh said...

I have always believed Haikus are the highest form of poetry (Urdu shers could be as good but the Haikus are the best). You haiku proves my point.

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